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21 Copywriting Tips To Go From Good to Great

21 Copywriting Tips To Go From Good to Great

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What readers in the past often referred to as good copy, today is just not good enough anymore. To really stand out, your copy needs to sound, feel, and look amazing. On top of that, it also needs to be persuasive, urgent, and hit all the critical storytelling beats to drive readers into immediate action.

Hereโ€™s a handy list of 21 copywriting tips to get your copy from good enough to exceptionally amazing.

1. Write Punchy Headlines

Whether youโ€™re creating a landing page, planning a cold email outreach campaign, or drafting a sales letter for your new Python course, the first thing readers will see is your headline. The punchier, the more memorable you can make your headline, the greater the chance people will read your copy in full.

Bombasโ€™ landing page is a great example of a punchy, yet relatable headline.

Bombasโ€™ landing page with text that reads "Your socks are showing."

2. โ€ฆThen Enrich Your Headline With a Parallelism

Parallelism is a type of literary trope intended to emphasize a sentence or phrase and make it rhythmically more impactful in the readerโ€™s eyes. It can also be used for catchy slogans like a radio jingle, a subheadline to embolden the main headlineโ€™s point, or a call to action (CTA) to make it more memorable.

Apple Pencil makes great use of the parallelism concept: โ€œDream it up. Jot it down.โ€

Apple Pencil ad with headline that reads โ€œDream it up. Jot it down.โ€

3. Be Straightforwardโ€”Not Clever

Whatever you need to say, use straightforward language in your copy. Any convolution or lack of clarity will provide an exit door that your readers will take repeatedly until you clear up your messaging. Note that using an occasionally clever language, in the right spot and in the right amount, is fine as long as it doesnโ€™t interfere with what youโ€™re trying to say.

Bowers & Wilkins follows the concept of clear and straightforward copy down to a tee.

Bowers & Wilkins copy covering true sound concept.

4. Use the Rule of Threes

For some reason, people seem to respond well to the rule of threes. Whenever youโ€™re listing product benefits, product cons, or simply naming items in an array, go ahead and list exactly three elements to reap the rewards of this powerful framework.

Hereโ€™s how Basecamp leverages the rules of three:

Basecamp copy showing the use of rules of three.

5. Embrace the Cliffhanger Technique

In copywriting, the cliffhanger technique refers to unfinished information you leave out about the product or service and promise your audience to reveal whatever youโ€™ve deliberately omitted in your next post.ย 

Why is this so effective? Turns out, this technique is deeply rooted in how humans think about tasks, reflected through the Zeigarnik Effect.ย 

In short, the Zeigarnik Effect posits that people with unfinished tasks keep any information about that task deeply lodged in their brains until the task is finished. Once they complete the task, it becomes more likely theyโ€™ll forget about any information associated with the taskโ€“such as restaurant waiters remembering complex orders and forgetting them as soon as theyโ€™re delivered.

Anyway, hereโ€™s an interesting example from Mike Sager that uses the cliffhanger method in direct response copywriting:

Example to show how Mike Sager uses the cliffhanger method.

6. Escape Dullness With Word Swapping

Word swapping is a simple tactic where you swap, edit, or shuffle around words in existing phrases to surprise the reader. In particular, the surprise factor isnโ€™t there to scare them away, but to break the pattern, get their attention, and build intrigue in the readerโ€™s mind. Intrigued prospects are more likely to read your copy and take action.

For example, Barkbox is turning the overused phrase โ€œWeโ€™ve got you coveredโ€ into a fun and playful headline: โ€œOur Pack Has Your Back.โ€

Bark box chat with us now landing page with text that reads โ€œOur Pack Has Your Back.โ€

7. Touch Up Your Copy With a Slight Jot of Sarcasm

Sarcasm is a potent weapon in the copywriting toolkit, if done right. Too much of it, and you start astounding like an asshole. Not enough sarcasm in a sarcastic environment, and suddenly youโ€™re branded as the token nice person, an outcome that isnโ€™t particularly well received in the business world.

However, if your product or service aligns more with snappiness than professionalism, you can use sarcasm to highlight the main benefits and make it pop off the page.

To demonstrate, take a look at Cards Against Humanityโ€™s FAQ page:

Cards Against Humanityโ€™s FAQ page with a headline that reads "Your dumb questions."

8. Limit Your Copyโ€”Intentionally

Writing is hard, not because youโ€™re picking which words to use out of a limited word pool, but because youโ€™re choosing what word or phrase combinations to discard from a set with an unlimited number of items.

By limiting your copy to something like 100, 200, or 300 words, youโ€™ve suddenly eliminated an entire set of combinations you were never going to use anyway. Then, you can focus on the things you can use within the self-imposed limits to reliably come up with a working draft, most of the time.

Brew Tea Companyโ€™s About Page is as short as it gets:

Brew Tea Companyโ€™s About Page.

9. Get Your Employees To Vouch for Your Skills

Your employeesโ€™ professional demeanor is a reflection of your leadership skills, and by extension, your company as a whole. If you can get one or more of them to vouch honestly for your capabilities, youโ€™ll unlock an entirely new demographic you never knew were interested in your products or servicesโ€”all thanks to the power of first-hand employee testimonials.ย 

Matt, Rapid Crushโ€™s lead copywriter, doesnโ€™t shy away from praising his boss, Jason Fladlien:

Rapid Crushโ€™s lead copywriter, Matt, praising his boss, Jason Fladlien.

10. Tell a Captivating Story

Nothing bores the reader more than an endless wall of text listing all the productโ€™s features, history, and use cases. On the other hand, nothing excites the reader more than a captivating story that carefully unravels like a line from a mysterious thread ball.ย 

Heads up: Use the โ€œbecause ofโ€ concept instead of the โ€œand thenโ€ concept to connect your lines and build an action-consequence system in your story, where every consequence is preceded by an action until the story ends.

Jus Jus, a verjuice variant, does this well.

Our story copy for Jus Jus.

11. Get Up Close and Personal

This is more akin to an overarching strategy than a single tactic, but if you can show your customers how and why theyโ€™ve used your product or service (and why they love it), theyโ€™ll be more inclined to stick around and recommend it to their friends and family.

Spotify Wrapped is a textbook example of a personalized campaign that spans multiple social platforms, news outlets, and short-form media corners.

2024 Spotify Wrapped campaign copy.

12. Identify (and Run With) the Productโ€™s USP

Most good products have a unique selling point (USP) you can use to your advantage. If they donโ€™t, theyโ€™re likely not a good product. In short: identify your product or serviceโ€™s USP and make it the focal point of your copy.

Iglooโ€™s electric-powered cooler builds on its USP in the product description.

Iglooโ€™s electric-powered cooler product page.

13. Be Empathetic And Approachable

A little empathy can go a long way in establishing trust with customers, regardless of their current status in life. An approachable copy, full of honest empathy (and bereft of melodrama or fake emotions), can incite curiosity in readers and make them want to talk to you, share their experiences, or even meet you in person. This is one way to build and maintain a brand reputation.

Marie Forleo, a popular entrepreneur, follows the rule of approachability and empathy in her landing pageโ€™s copy masterfully.

Marie Forleo's about page with headline that reads "Heya! I'm Marie."

14. Address Your Target Audience

If you donโ€™t know who youโ€™re writing to or writing about, your marketingโ€™s going to suffer as a result. Your target audience should shape your copy, and you should always strive to address their needs and desires as specifically as possible. Otherwise, youโ€™ll end up writing about a non-existent audience or an audience that isnโ€™t enthusiastic about your products or services, leading to an inevitable revenue decline.

Huckberryโ€™s tagline is simple, yet it perfectly encapsulates its main target demographic: men with an interest in the casual outdoors experience.

Huckberryโ€™s tagline "The One Stop Men's Shop."

15. Sneak In a Readership โ€œBribeโ€

A readership bribe refers to a tidbit of information youโ€™re promising to reveal in exchange for the prospectโ€™s time. Ideally, these so-called bribes will hint at some knowledge, truth, or a lesser-known tip that will be featured in the full copy, whether youโ€™re composing an advertisement, a sales letter, or an email newsletter.

Agora Financialโ€™s sales letters are the perfect encapsulation of effective readership bribes.

Agora Financialโ€™s sales letter about a powerful new form of energy.

16. Use a Copywriting Formula

Whenever youโ€™re stuck, use a copywriting formula like AIDA or PAS to dig yourself out of a creative drought.ย 

AIDA stands for Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action. Use it to make the reader pay attention to your copy, stir up their interest, make them want the product by addressing their objections, and, finally, give them a nudge in the right direction to make a purchase. AIDA is great for a long-form copy, like a sales letter or a landing page.

PAS is short for Problem, Agitation, Solution. You can leverage PAS to outline a problem customers often face, exaggerate the problem to its logical extreme, and offer a solution in the form of your product or service. PAS excels at short-form copy, like an email pitch or a short video commercial.

Hereโ€™s how Gary Halbert thought about the AIDA formula in action:

Gary Halbert using the AIDA formula in copy.

17. Offer Exclusive Membership Status (+ Free Goodies!)

People love getting stuff for free, as long as the effort of getting a free item doesnโ€™t eclipse the final reward.ย 

For example, customers will gladly fill out and send a coupon to receive exclusive book club membership status if the application itself takes no longer than 5 minutes. If, on the other hand, there are 15 people standing in line to sample Walmartโ€™s newest in-store cheddar cheese, the 16th person will likely pass on the opportunity because it simply takes too much time to obtain the reward.

The solution? Strike a delicate balance between the effort prospects need to make and the reward waiting for them on the other side.

Cooking Club of America has perfected the direct mail package game, offering tons of free stuff, exclusive membership status, and lots of other goodies that make it worthwhile for the reader to actively participate in their campaign.

Cooking Club of America's direct mail campaign copy.

18. Turn It Up a Notch With Onomatopoeia

Onomatopoeia is a trope that phonetically imitates the word or sound it describes, like โ€œOuch!โ€ when somebody gets their toe stubbed on the side of the furniture or โ€œClick!โ€ to describe a plastic gear falling into place.

In advertising, the best use case of onomatopoeia comes from an old video ad that was originally written in 1953 by Paul Margulies, but didnโ€™t air until 1975. The catchy slogan that apparently made customers double their use of the advertised product, Alka-Seltzer, did it in just 10 words: โ€œPlop, plop, fizz, fizz, oh what a relief it is.โ€

Screenshot from Alka-Seltzer campaign aired in 1975.

19. Get Visual

Modern copywriting is much more than just text on a screen. Itโ€™s also become deeply embedded in how it visually appears to prospects, fighting over every inch of customersโ€™ attention against a constantly evolving competitive landscapeโ€”including AI-generated copy.

To really, really stand out, you need to present information in such a way that itโ€™s visually appealing, easy to digest, and geometrically complementary with your siteโ€™s theme.

Take a look at Wunderkindโ€™s delivery. Itโ€™s using a simple visual representation to describe how things in marketing are going from bad to worse, offering an actionable solution for affected ecommerce stores.

Wunderkindโ€™s visual representation of marketing statistics with percentages.

20. Use An Inviting CTA

CTA buttons and forms come in all shapes and sizes. Some work better than others, but to compare the effectiveness of different CTA variants in the wild, youโ€™ll need to run an A/B testing tool for at least a month.

If you donโ€™t have access to an A/B testing environment, go with an inviting, pleasant CTA to ease customers into giving out their contact information.

Tim Ferriss makes a great first impression. Thereโ€™s a welcoming hero image at the top of the page, showing Tim in a good mood, sitting next to his dog. On the right-hand side, you can see a creative headline (โ€œDonโ€™t miss out on the 5 coolest things Iโ€™ve found each weekโ€) and a descriptive subheadline (โ€œJoin 1.5M+ subscribers and sign up for 5-Bullet Friday, my free weekly email newsletterโ€) working in unison to deliver key information to potential subscribers as gently as possible.

Finally, thereโ€™s a warm โ€œTry itโ€ CTA against a soft yellow background that completes the invitation to Timโ€™s subscriber list.

Photo of Tim Ferriss with his dog and a CTA for an email signup.

21. Break the Rules

To become a chess grandmaster, first you must learn the basics, master them, and then proceed to break all the principles when facing an opponent of comparable strength.

Similarly, the copywriting grandmaster must learn the basics of the craft, ply them to perfection, and then break the rules at the right time.

Unfortunately, thereโ€™s no shortcut to mastery. You need time, effort, and experience to get your copy from good enough to exceptionally amazing.

Hereโ€™s a pertinent example from Ubisoftโ€™s X social media handle, a meta-marketing stunt that ratioed twenty-fold the richest man on the planet and helped Assassinโ€™s Creed Shadows become the third most-played entry in the series. Just donโ€™t ask for context, and youโ€™ll be fine.

Ubisoftโ€™s X account showing thread between Elon Musk and Assassinโ€™s Creed.

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